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NLP Copywriting Critique Service
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Are you the type of marketer who belongs to one of these groups:

  • You've written up your website, but it's not converting visitors into buyers
  • You're not sure if you've added too many or too few NLP Language Patterns for Advertising
  • You're not sure if you are using the NLP Language Patterns correctly
  • You're not a native speaker of English, but you do want to make a great impression to the huge and rich English-speaking market

No matter what your situation. We want to help you and make your advertising more effective. You send us something you're working on, maybe something that isn't selling so well. We'll look over what you've done and convert it into a non-stoppable selling machine.

Working with us is so easy, too: just send us what you're working on. We'll send it back to you, completely polished and persuasive with just the right amount of NLP Language Patterns and emotional triggers to get your customers off their butts and into action.

Here's what you get with our service:

  • The benefits of your offer painted in the most enticing way
  • A clear message to your readers so they ACT NOW!
  • A quick turn around
  • Very reasonable price

Obviously, this service will help you and your business get out of any slump you might be in. And with talk of a recession just around the corner, you need to convince the greatest number of people, quickly.

So stop knocking your head against your keyboard and pulling your hair out. Writing strong, effective, money-making copywriting is tough. Send us what you've done. Go get a cup of coffee and while you're doing that, we'll be fixing up your ad.

This offer is only available to the first ten people who contact us before April 10, 2008.

BONUS: If you are accepted, I will also send you, absolutely free, The NLP Language Patterns for Advertising Workbook. This is a USD$15.00 value. 

Free Bonus: NLP LANGUAGE PATTERNS FOR ADVERTISING WORKBOOK

Here's what's included in this workbook:

• Knowing what you want and how to get it - so you can sell people on your ideas more easily

• Helping your customers get what they want - and how to show them you're the only place they can get it

• Getting people's attention. If your ads and websites don't do this, you won't be going anywhere

• Using Presuppositions to get customers to automatically, subconsciously believe what you say is true (definitely a plus in this age of skepticism). Once you use selling presuppositions in your advertising, you'll be absolutely amazed at the results!

•Patterns to establish instant credibility - even if you have none - even if you're just starting out

• Pace customer's current experience so they can see you as possibly the only person who can really help them

• Sell anything by creating an intense desire with just your words!

• Paint an irresistible picture of the future with your product in it!

• Use embedded commands to subconsciously direct customers' actions and feelings under the wire

• Patterns to handle and neutralize objections before they come up - if you can't do this, you're not going to sell very much

• Create persuasive, legal testimonials out of thin air!

• Putting everything together into one persuasive package

This workbook is a digital product/software for Windows where you learn about the patterns, then you create patterns for your products or services, press a button, and your personalize language patterns are copied to your clipboard - ready for use in your website, eBay descriptions, classified ads - wherever you need a little extra persuasion!


The NLP Copywriting Critique is Available to You for ONLY $39.97 and includes the bonus gift...

This price is good for two pages of your copy. Give me your weak copy plus a few hours, and I'll give you a mighty selling-machine ready to sell your stuff 24 hours a day. And all for a price that's cheaper than a crappy get-rich-quick ebook.

Here's all you have to do to get started now:

1. Click on the PayPal button below

2. Send me your document as an email, or as an attachment, or if you are using Google Docs or Zoho, an invitation

3. I'll get back to you immediately and send you the free bonus


And that's it. You'll soon have powerful, persuasive copy that you can use where you see fit. This copywriting can easily make you thousands of extra dollars. Because with it, you'll be communicating with the true desires of your customers.

Or if you'd rather receive an invoice, email me here:

"This tiny acorn - your sales piece - can grow into a strong, mighty business. It's happened before to many businesses that started small. Why not you?"

 

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